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M. Kinghorn's avatar

"Tossed a little ways away, lying among the treeroots, was a human arm, a left arm, colors ranging from pale to nearly black, severed at the elbow."

I audibly gasped. (Well, I audibly gasped a couple times, but this time was the loudest.)

Also, I love how after the revelation of the forester's name—more specifically, after he spends the night staring and finally reaches his decision—he is never referred to as "Berent" by the narration again. Just "the forester." Shedding his past life (much like his tongue and his arm) to preserve the child's. Wonderful!

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Kelsey Keohane's avatar

Reading this as a new mom to a little boy was hard and I felt the stakes viscerally. Well done!

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