You've done it again, Ian! I'm not quite sure how you made me feel so many emotions in such a short span of time, but this truly a masterful story. The voice, the characters, the romance, the existential dilemma of immortality... Chef's kiss!
If you have a Canva account you can make a magazine on there pretty easy! I made one for my family in November and it was pretty cheap if all you want is one copy (or several I paid about $120 for 10). Touch base if you’re ever curious on the how or need help. I live in Canva
You've done it again, Ian! I'm not quite sure how you made me feel so many emotions in such a short span of time, but this truly a masterful story. The voice, the characters, the romance, the existential dilemma of immortality... Chef's kiss!
Fuck Ian this was brilliant!
I live for raw reviews such as these. Thank you so much NJ!
Good stuff truly. I hope you print it out even for yourself! Hard copy.
My wife wants to turn these little stories into something she can have on the shelf eventually. It will happen!
If you have a Canva account you can make a magazine on there pretty easy! I made one for my family in November and it was pretty cheap if all you want is one copy (or several I paid about $120 for 10). Touch base if you’re ever curious on the how or need help. I live in Canva
Oooh good find! I'll probably go that route, thanks!
This might be the best story I've read on Substack. Well done!
What a wonderful compliment!! Thank you Kailani!
Keep up the great work!
Well done, Ian! This is a beautiful story. We need more beautiful stories.
Thank you so much Lyndsey!
This was a delightful read - I was entranced by this world and I love the lessons it conveys. Powerful and beautiful!
Thanks Gillian! The theme is one I feel leaks into everything I write, this time it came through the mostly intensely!
It's timeless for a reason! We have similar styles in writing stories that pose much deeper philosophical questions :)
What a beautiful read!
Thank you, Silvia!
❤️
Great! Hopefully it doesn't fit an adventure as the past one! ...but great!
Thanks Axel!
So very good.
So glad you liked it! I said it in Notes, but I've never done a love story before, so this was a stretch for me.
It was perfect.
This is the highest praise I've ever gotten on a story of mine. You've made my day, Sir.
Heartfelt and meant!