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Keith Long's avatar

Beautiful story, the blending of myth into the missive is so well done. It feels very authentic. There’s few things I love and appreciate more than myths and legends an author creates.

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maryh10000's avatar

Yes. A wonderful, wonderful story. And quite true. Raw power alone cannot MAINTAIN anything. And I loved your characterization of the mother, and the use of feminine symbols of wisdom: "Each of you I bore in the month of Vesumpis beneath the constellation of the spool and distaff. Thus, even as I spun you in my womb, may I, by God’s grace, spin wisdom for you now." Minerva was the goddess of wisdom, war and weaving.

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