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Brannley Miller's avatar

Another great one, Ian! I really enjoyed the pacing on this one. I like how you introduced the magic system in parallel with the action of the story. Plus, Wingolf seems like a fun dude to share a beer with.

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Keith Long's avatar

This is insanely good. The philosophy and the fighting — Grade A Beef. (Also, thanks for your help with my story, I just posted it and it’s much better thanks to your aid!)

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